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[edit source]17:53:10, 14 January 2017 review of submission by Rozybienert
[edit source]- Rozybienert (talk · contribs)
Telecoming
Hi, I was wondering what improvements can be made on this article in order to make it a more suitable encyclopedical content. In my opinion the language used is quite neutral and free from adjectives which may indicate a precise positioning regarding the content. Nonetheless, I am determined to follow your advice concerning the content adaptations. I would be really thankful if you could give me some examples on how to improve it. Many thanks Rozy(Rozybienert (talk) 17:29, 14 January 2017 (UTC))
Rozybienert (talk) 17:53, 14 January 2017 (UTC)
- The draft in question is Draft:Telecoming. I declined it as reading like an advertisement. Do other experienced editors have comments, or suggestions for the author? Robert McClenon (talk) 01:40, 15 January 2017 (UTC)
21:36:29, 14 January 2017 review of submission by 2601:647:5400:A833:7C:8D21:EA8D:BA4D
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I am trying to create a page for author Brian Doyle. It is a popular name and there are other 9-10 other pages for such-named people, even another author. But not for this one. How should I specify that this isn't duplicate?
2601:647:5400:A833:7C:8D21:EA8D:BA4D (talk) 21:36, 14 January 2017 (UTC)
- Hello, IP address. Would Draft:Brian Doyle (Oregonian writer) be acceptable to you? If so, I'll be happy to make that change. NewYorkActuary (talk) 23:40, 14 January 2017 (UTC)
- Follow-up Never mind. I see that someone else has already changed the title to Draft:Brian Doyle (American writer). NewYorkActuary (talk) 04:20, 15 January 2017 (UTC)