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[edit source]01:28:12, 17 April 2017 review of submission by Joslad1
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Can you please shift the "Sources" section with the two listed books by DT Stewart and JE Traue below the "References" section? Thank youJoslad1 (talk) 01:28, 17 April 2017 (UTC)
Joslad1 (talk) 01:28, 17 April 2017 (UTC)
Done --Worldbruce (talk) 13:40, 17 April 2017 (UTC)
13:22:07, 17 April 2017 review of submission by Hutchi333
[edit source]Any advice on how to improve the neutral point of view in this article would be much appreciated, thank you! Hutchi333 (talk) 13:22, 17 April 2017 (UTC)
- Reply - I would refer you to the document Wikipedia:Neutral_point_of_view. I would also focus on the history (if notable) rather than your sales pitch. As regards how you might rephrase something in a less advertorial manner, here is an example: "Although a British brand, Troubadour works mostly with Italian suppliers for its vegetable-tanned leather, fabrics and zippers," would be better phrased as, "Some of the textiles and materials used by Troubadour, such as zippers or fabrics, are sourced from Italy." I would also avoid terms like "luxury". Isingness (talk) 18:37, 17 April 2017 (UTC)
17:41:33, 17 April 2017 review of submission by Cecilith
[edit source]Riccardo Marchesini (http://www.imdb.com/name/nm8899218/?ref_=tt_ov_dr) is an italian director; unfortunately there is a homonym already in wikipedia, a canoer with the same name! I am trying to create a page for the director! I thought I had enough references to prove he is real! I am not sure now what was wrong.. Please help :-D
Cecilith (talk) 17:41, 17 April 2017 (UTC)
- Hi, Cecilith, and welcome to Articles for Creation! It seems like you're just using links to other websites, which is fine, but they aren't formatted properly. Please take a look at WP:Referencing for beginners. Thanks! ProgrammingGeek talktome 18:11, 17 April 2017 (UTC)
21:23:00, 17 April 2017 review of submission by WadeDeadpoolWilson
[edit source]- Hello, Wade. Did you have a specific question? NewYorkActuary (talk) 21:31, 17 April 2017 (UTC)
Note: see WP:Articles for deletion/SwimSwam ProgrammingGeek talktome 23:07, 17 April 2017 (UTC)
