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= January 14 =

== 17:53:10, 14 January 2017 review of submission by Rozybienert ==
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Draft:Telecoming (edit | talk | history | links | watch | logs)

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Telecoming

Hi, I was wondering what improvements can be made on this article in order to make it a more suitable encyclopedical content. In my opinion the language used is quite neutral and free from adjectives which may indicate a precise positioning regarding the content. Nonetheless, I am determined to follow your advice concerning the content adaptations. I would be really thankful if you could give me some examples on how to improve it. Many thanks Rozy(Rozybienert (talk) 17:29, 14 January 2017 (UTC))

[[User:Rozybienert|Rozybienert]] ([[User talk:Rozybienert|talk]]) 17:53, 14 January 2017 (UTC)
::The draft in question is [[Draft:Telecoming]]. I declined it as reading like an advertisement. Do other experienced editors have comments, or suggestions for the author? [[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) 01:40, 15 January 2017 (UTC)

== 21:36:29, 14 January 2017 review of submission by 2601:647:5400:A833:7C:8D21:EA8D:BA4D ==
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I am trying to create a page for author Brian Doyle. It is a popular name and there are other 9-10 other pages for such-named people, even another author. But not for this one. How should I specify that this isn't duplicate?

[[Special:Contributions/2601:647:5400:A833:7C:8D21:EA8D:BA4D|2601:647:5400:A833:7C:8D21:EA8D:BA4D]] ([[User talk:2601:647:5400:A833:7C:8D21:EA8D:BA4D|talk]]) 21:36, 14 January 2017 (UTC)
:Hello, IP address. Would [[Draft:Brian Doyle (Oregonian writer)]] be acceptable to you? If so, I'll be happy to make that change. [[User:NewYorkActuary|NewYorkActuary]] ([[User talk:NewYorkActuary|talk]]) 23:40, 14 January 2017 (UTC)
:<u>Follow-up</u> Never mind. I see that someone else has already changed the title to [[Draft:Brian Doyle (American writer)]]. [[User:NewYorkActuary|NewYorkActuary]] ([[User talk:NewYorkActuary|talk]]) 04:20, 15 January 2017 (UTC)

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