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= January 11 =

== 07:05:39, 11 January 2016 review of submission by MelitaFernandes ==
{{Lafc|username=MelitaFernandes|ts=07:05:39, 11 January 2016|page=Draft:Four Fountains De-Stress Spa}}

[[User:MelitaFernandes|MelitaFernandes]] ([[User talk:MelitaFernandes|talk]]) 07:05, 11 January 2016 (UTC)

Hello! I need to request an existing wikipedia editor to edit my article. How can i get help from other editors who can willingly rework on the article. My existing article can serve as a reference draft. Thanks [[User:MelitaFernandes|MelitaFernandes]] ([[User talk:MelitaFernandes|talk]]) 07:05, 11 January 2016 (UTC)

== 12:12:43, 11 January 2016 review of submission by Dele at Zoe ==
{{Lafc|username=Dele at Zoe|ts=12:12:43, 11 January 2016|page=Draft:Zoe Records}}

Hi we would like to have information about our article, because it didn't accepted, we have respect all conditions and we putted all reference, we don't understand why for second time the article was not accepted. We hope that you can help us.

[[User:Dele at Zoe|Dele at Zoe]] ([[User talk:Dele at Zoe|talk]]) 12:12, 11 January 2016 (UTC)
:{{reply to|Dele at Zoe}} Hello, and welcome to the Help Desk! I declined your draft because it did not show [[WP:CORP|why the company was suitable for inclusion in Wikipedia]]. (This is known as "notability".) In order to be considered for acceptance, such articles require a variety of high-quality references from [[WP:RS|reliable sources]], and the coverage therein should be significant and in-depth. At the time of submission, one reference was [[WP:PRIMARY|to the company's own website]], meaning it is not an independent source of information and thus does not help show notability. Keep in mind that the references you cite should be ''about'' Zoe Records, not ''by'' Zoe Records.
:I see you have added some new references to the draft. Can you provide some more information about them so that future reviewers and readers can track them down? The type of bibliographic information needed includes date of publication, author, magazine, page number, publishing house and the like. Then we can find those sources and assess them. Thanks, [[User:Wiae|<span style="color:#600">/wiae</span>]] [[David Bowie|★]] [[User talk:Wiae|<span style="color:#600"><small>/tlk</small></span>]] 17:38, 11 January 2016 (UTC)

::Do you have a [[WP:COI|conflict of interest]]? You should expect conflict-of-interest drafts to be reviewed critically. [[User:Robert McClenon|Robert McClenon]] ([[User talk:Robert McClenon|talk]]) 17:36, 11 January 2016 (UTC)

== 16:30:52, 11 January 2016 review of submission by Azeeq Mazlan ==
{{Lafc|username=Azeeq Mazlan|ts=16:30:52, 11 January 2016|pending=User:Azeeq_Mazlan/sandbox/Azeeq_Mazlan}}

[[User:Azeeq Mazlan|Azeeq Mazlan]] ([[User talk:Azeeq Mazlan|talk]]) 16:30, 11 January 2016 (UTC)
:Dealt with below. [[User:Wiae|<span style="color:#600">/wiae</span>]] [[David Bowie|★]] [[User talk:Wiae|<span style="color:#600"><small>/tlk</small></span>]] 17:34, 11 January 2016 (UTC)

== Request on 16:46:31, 11 January 2016 for assistance on [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|AfC]] submission by Jules Delacey ==
{{anchor|16:46:31, 11 January 2016 review of submission by Jules Delacey}}
{{Lafc|username=Jules Delacey|ts=16:46:31, 11 January 2016|declinedtalk=Draft:Gerard_Coyne}}


I have submitted an article with citation and it has been declined. i thought the whole point was for people to help edit them? It's been declined with no help edits.

[[User:Jules Delacey|Jules Delacey]] ([[User talk:Jules Delacey|talk]]) 16:46, 11 January 2016 (UTC)

== Request on 17:11:20, 11 January 2016 for assistance on [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|AfC]] submission by Azeeq Mazlan ==
{{anchor|17:11:20, 11 January 2016 review of submission by Azeeq Mazlan}}
{{Lafc|username=Azeeq Mazlan|ts=17:11:20, 11 January 2016|declinedtalk=User:Azeeq_Mazlan/sandbox/Azeeq_Mazlan}}



[[User:Azeeq Mazlan|Azeeq Mazlan]] ([[User talk:Azeeq Mazlan|talk]]) 17:11, 11 January 2016 (UTC)
:{{reply to|Azeeq Mazlan}} Hello, and welcome to the Help Desk. Do you have a specific question about your draft? It was declined because it does not contain any content. Further, note that [[WP:AUTOBIOGRAPHY|writing an autobiography on Wikipedia is strongly discouraged]], due in large part to the [[WP:COI|conflict-of-interest issues]] it raises. Thanks, [[User:Wiae|<span style="color:#600">/wiae</span>]] [[David Bowie|★]] [[User talk:Wiae|<span style="color:#600"><small>/tlk</small></span>]] 17:33, 11 January 2016 (UTC)

== 19:15:11, 11 January 2016 review of submission by Jesus Rey-Joly ==
{{Lafc|username=Jesus Rey-Joly|ts=19:15:11, 11 January 2016|declined=Draft:Carlos_Miranda}}

Any help would be much appreciated to make this draft about Carlos Miranda acceptable. The first two paragraphs do not have inline citations. Is this why the draft has been rejected? Is there anything else that requires amendments in any way? I would be happy to comply with any requirements that I can understand more specifically. Thanks for your help. Jesus Rey-Joly

:Hi, [[User:Jesus Rey-Joly]]. I just had a look at the draft. I clicked through on some of the references and there are some problems. If you haven't already done so, go read [[wp:rs]] which is the page about "reliable sources." You've used some sources that don't meet the criteria there. For example, the svrproducciones source is a sales site, and that is not a reliable source. I know that you were intending to link to proof that the album exists, but in this case it's best not. The "list of students by teacher" and the Zoominfo entry also should be removed. If you would like, I could go through and edit out the sources that shouldnt' be there, then we could see where the gaps are. I think we can make this work. [[User:LaMona|LaMona]] ([[User talk:LaMona|talk]]) 16:45, 13 January 2016 (UTC)

== 20:56:48, 11 January 2016 review of submission by Aboulouei1 ==
{{Lafc|username=Aboulouei1|ts=20:56:48, 11 January 2016|pending=User:Aboulouei1/sandbox}}

[[User:Aboulouei1|Aboulouei1]] ([[User talk:Aboulouei1|talk]]) 20:56, 11 January 2016 (UTC)--[[User:Aboulouei1|Aboulouei1]] ([[User talk:Aboulouei1|talk]]) 20:56, 11 January 2016 (UTC)
:{{reply to|Aboulouei1}} Hello, and welcome to the Help Desk. Your draft was declined because it is in French. This is the English-language Wikipedia. You may want to consider joining the French-language Wikipedia. Thanks, [[User:Wiae|<span style="color:#600">/wiae</span>]] [[David Bowie|★]] [[User talk:Wiae|<span style="color:#600"><small>/tlk</small></span>]] 23:05, 11 January 2016 (UTC)

== 21:24:47, 11 January 2016 review of submission by Cgelineli ==
{{Lafc|username=Cgelineli|ts=21:24:47, 11 January 2016|page=Draft:Navionics}}
Could you please point out specific sentences where you feel the article reads like an advertisement as now that is the message I am getting for non publication? I will happily rewrite with some specific feedback. Is there anything specific I should delete altogether? Thank you! [[User:Cgelineli|Cgelineli]] ([[User talk:Cgelineli|talk]]) 21:24, 11 January 2016 (UTC)cgelineli

[[User:Cgelineli|Cgelineli]] ([[User talk:Cgelineli|talk]]) 21:24, 11 January 2016 (UTC)

== Request on 22:29:51, 11 January 2016 for assistance on [[Wikipedia:Articles for creation|AfC]] submission by 679699sof ==
{{anchor|22:29:51, 11 January 2016 review of submission by 679699sof}}
{{Lafc|username=679699sof|ts=22:29:51, 11 January 2016|declinedtalk=Draft:Adriana_Sanford}}


I don't know how to put the footnotes into the biography of Adriana Sanford.
Is it possible to have someone assist me with this part?

[[User:679699sof|679699sof]] ([[User talk:679699sof|talk]]) 22:29, 11 January 2016 (UTC)

:{{done}} Another editor published it at [[Adriana Sanford]]. [[User:MatthewVanitas|MatthewVanitas]] ([[User talk:MatthewVanitas|talk]]) 23:02, 12 January 2016 (UTC)

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