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= September 17 =

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Legitmix]] ==

Hello. I wrote the article by stating fact from the articles. Can you give me an example of what you feel is opinion in the article? Thank You, [[User:Sonjaydewing|Sonjaydewing]] ([[User talk:Sonjaydewing|talk]]) 00:13, 17 September 2013 (UTC)

:The article discusses the product at length (how simple it is, how legal it is, a rather insufficient explanation of how it works and so on) and provides next to no information on the company itself. How many employees does it have, what are the revenues? Did they get seed funding, and if so, how much? The article doesn't tell. The "company" content seems more of an empty shell for the "look at our great product" content. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 03:54, 17 September 2013 (UTC)

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Martine Fougeron]] ==

Hi,
I created this article on August 26th and it was rejected because there were not enough references. I worked on this and added a lot of references but still no approval.
https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Martine_Fougeron
Can someone tell me if references are still the issue with the article?
Thanks! — Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Marjol80|Marjol80]] ([[User talk:Marjol80|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Marjol80|contribs]]) 01:20, 17 September 2013 (UTC) 

:That's still the old decline message which is kept as a historical record until the draft is accepted. The draft has been re-submitted, but not re-reviewed yet. Please be patient. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 03:54, 17 September 2013 (UTC)

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Asaph Adona]] ==

Hi Matthew Vanitas
Thank you for your letter. I got your message. I am new at Wikipeida. Your message said my submission was denied for now. I want to be able to write my submission
How do I properly write my submission and put my photos on Wikipedia?
Thank you
Asaph Adonai
Supermarket Pianist — Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Supermarket Pianist|Supermarket Pianist]] ([[User talk:Supermarket Pianist|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Supermarket Pianist|contribs]]) 01:34, 17 September 2013 (UTC) 

:You will have to cite [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] that are [[WP:Independent sources|independent]] of the subject, such as newspaper articles on Adona. You may also want to have a look at our guideline on [[WP:COI|conflicts of interest]] - writing an [[WP:Autobiography|autobiography]] is strongly discouraged, and it would probably be best to wait until an editor not associated with you decides to write an article about you.
:Regarding the images, that's an issue of copyright. Do you own the copyright for those images? Are you willing to release them under a free license so that everybody may re-use and modify them for any purpose, including commercial purposes? If so, you can upload them to the [[:commons:Main Page|Wikimedia Commons]] via their [[:commons:Special:UploadWizard|Upload Wizard]]. However, whether or not the draft will be accepted does not depend on the images. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 03:54, 17 September 2013 (UTC)

== Review of Halo Dogs Ltd ==

I am reviewing [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Halo Dogs Ltd]] -

I Noticed that an article on the same subject exists: [[Halo Dogs]].

What is the procedure now? Thanks --[[User:Itemirus|Itemirus]][[User talk:Itemirus| (talk) ]] 06:50, 17 September 2013 (UTC)

Never mind - I didn't notice there is an appropriate tag when declining. --[[User:Itemirus|Itemirus]][[User talk:Itemirus| (talk) ]] 06:52, 17 September 2013 (UTC)

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Localised provoked vulvodynia]] ==

How do I get my figures into the article?
It would be fair to eventually reviewers that they are able to see them here.
---- — Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Klaus Cort|Klaus Cort]] ([[User talk:Klaus Cort|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Klaus Cort|contribs]]) 08:57, 17 September 2013 (UTC) 

:Firstly I have corrected the link to the draft. It seems to me you need to create tables for the figures - see [[Help:Table]]. However your draft has many other issues that need attention, I'd advise you to seek help from the specialists at [[WP:WikiProject Medicine]], they can help you with the requirements for articles on medical subjects. [[User:Dodger67|Roger (Dodger67)]] ([[User talk:Dodger67|talk]]) 09:49, 17 September 2013 (UTC)

::One major problem is that it reads like a research paper not an encyclopedia article. I am not a medic, so I cannot tell if it is original research, but one give-away is that it has a "Conclusions" section - Wikipedia articles don't draw conclusions, they just present what is already reported in reliable secondary sources.--[[User:Ukexpat|ukexpat]] ([[User talk:Ukexpat|talk]]) 18:29, 17 September 2013 (UTC)

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Sidney Mason Stone]] ==

After submitting my draft from my sandbox page I found warnings that the page already existed and telling me to rename the page. I then transferred all of the text to this page (Articles for creation/Sidney Mason Stone. Is it still included in the submissions now that it has a new title/location or does it need to be resubmitted from here?

[[User:Paperchaser29|Paperchaser29]] ([[User talk:Paperchaser29|talk]]) 11:45, 17 September 2013 (UTC) paperchaser29

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Ginger Pig FC]] ==

I was just wandering why my article for creation request was rejected — Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Kev sandall|Kev sandall]] ([[User talk:Kev sandall|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Kev sandall|contribs]]) 14:51, 17 September 2013 (UTC) 

:Hello [[User:Kev sandall|Kev sandall]], did you read the comments left at the top of your page? You need to demonstrate [[WP:Notability]], that is, that news media or academia has found it worthwhile to write about this FC. Otherwise, we have no objective coverage to base an article on. [[User:MatthewVanitas|MatthewVanitas]] ([[User talk:MatthewVanitas|talk]]) 15:09, 17 September 2013 (UTC)

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Vimal Shah]] ==

My article on Vimal Shah, CEO, of Bidco Oil Refineries - a 27 year old company that he has steered to a envious position, has been rejected. I understand the presentation might be wrong and would like to request for a template in which I can do a similar kind of biography. Other wise I do not see why an individual of the capacity of Vimal should not be featured in Wikipedia. He has great following among Africans and were you to ask any educated working professional whether he knows Vimal Shah or Bidco - the answer would be yes.

I am sure there is a logical reason for the rejection and would like to know the reasons.

I am writer and would be greatly interested in contributing regularly to writing and editing for Wikipedia.

Regards

P D Anthony — Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/41.84.135.154|41.84.135.154]] ([[User talk:41.84.135.154|talk]]) 15:42, 17 September 2013 (UTC) 

:Hello [[User:Pdass|Pdass]]: the reason the draft was rejected is that you have provided no [[WP:Sourcing]] whatsoever. Please understand that for Shah's own sake we ''must'' have a high evidentiary standard to prevent misleading or slanderous information being in articles. So for any given fact, there must be a "here's where this is verified" footnote which references a news article, business journal, etc. Please see [[WP:Referencing for beginners]] as needed. Note that sources affiliated with Shah (bio at a company he works for, personal website, etc.) can only be used for non-contentious data like birthplace/date. All claims to fame, accomplishments, etc. must be clearly cited to an independent, objective source.

:I do indeed hope that you'll continue to work with us here at Wikipedia after you finish up your current article. ''Please don't forget to log-in when editing Wikipedia'', because otherwise it's hard to converse with your account since we cannot see what username is addressing us. (note your comment above is signed anonymously rather than to your Pdass account). [[User:MatthewVanitas|MatthewVanitas]] ([[User talk:MatthewVanitas|talk]]) 17:08, 17 September 2013 (UTC)

==Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Center for Undergraduate Research in Mathematics]]==
I have rewritten the following article, and can't find a Resubmit feature anywhere. How do I resubmit this work for approval?
[[Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Center_for_Undergraduate_Research_in_Mathematics]]

Thanks,
Dmcoff [[User:Dmcoff|Dmcoff]] ([[User talk:Dmcoff|talk]]) 17:56, 17 September 2013 (UTC)

:Your recent edits deleted the original AFC template. I have added it back so all you need to do is click the "Resubmit" button in the pink box.--[[User:Ukexpat|ukexpat]] ([[User talk:Ukexpat|talk]]) 18:03, 17 September 2013 (UTC)

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/KNS Tha Engineer]] ==

Hello, we are interested in submitting artists bios on wikipedia. We attempted to submit a Bio from KNS Tha Engineer, but it was rejected. We'd like to resubmit within the guidelines of wikipedia and create a wiki page for KNS. Please help. Thanks — Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Abbrecords|Abbrecords]] ([[User talk:Abbrecords|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Abbrecords|contribs]]) 18:24, 17 September 2013 (UTC) 

:It was rejected because all it said was "Hello"; that is not a draft for review. Either you were just testing the system, or else you didn't save your draft right. Before you begin, I ''strongly urge'' you to read [[WP:Notability (music)]]. This policy explicitly lays out what you ''must'' prove for a musician article. If your draft does not meet the standards laid out there, it will not be approved, so it is very important to read and understand it. [[User:MatthewVanitas|MatthewVanitas]] ([[User talk:MatthewVanitas|talk]]) 20:17, 17 September 2013 (UTC)

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Sea Pointe Estates]] ==

[[File:Symbol question.svg|17px]] Question: question

How do I edit my article that was denied. I need to modify some of the content since I don't have a proper source.

Thank you,
([[User:Seapointeestates|Seapointeestates]] ([[User talk:Seapointeestates|talk]]) 20:51, 17 September 2013 (UTC))

:There's an "edit source" link at the very top of the page, between "read" and "view history". See also [[Help:Editing]]. You should first get unblocked via the {{mono|{{tlp|unblock-un|''new username''<nowiki>|reason=</nowiki>''Your reason here'' <nowiki>~~~~</nowiki>}}}} template (replacing "Your reason here" and "new username" as appropriate, of course). [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 00:32, 18 September 2013 (UTC)
== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Ryan Begelman]] ==

Hi,
I just did a minor edit to an article I submitted, Ryan Begelman, a couple weeks ago and it got bumped to the back of the line. Does every edit bump articles to the back of the line or was this a mistake? Is there anyway to make this not happen?

Thanks!
[[User:Dacusthompson|Dacusthompson]] ([[User talk:Dacusthompson|talk]]) 23:07, 17 September 2013 (UTC)

:Actually that doesn't bump back the article at all unless you submit it a second time; I expect what you saw was just that the queue got longer, not that your draft's position within the queue changed. Drafts aren't necessarily reviewed in chronological order anyway. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 00:32, 18 September 2013 (UTC)

== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Bradwardine and District Timeline]] ==

Re: ARTICLE: Bradwardine and District Timeline

This submission was rejected. I'd appreciate knowing the reasons for the rejection so I can improve it and resubmit.

Thank you

Dilys Collier[[User:Tyndalstone|Tyndalstone]] ([[User talk:Tyndalstone|talk]]) 23:16, 17 September 2013 (UTC)

Hello, [[User:Tyndalstone|Tyndalstone]]. The reviewer has left a detailed message at the top of the page at [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Bradwardine and District Timeline]]. Also, I believe that I talked to you once before about this topic, and you told me that you had adapted this material from a book. If by this you mean that you have totally rewritten the text in your own words, that's fine. However, if you have just selected sentences from the book and added them to the submission, this is a copyright violation and you should remove it until it is rewritten. —[[User:Anne Delong|Anne Delong]] ([[User talk:Anne Delong|talk]]) 23:36, 17 September 2013 (UTC)

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