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= September 16 =&lt;br /&gt;
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== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Andrew Berry]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hello, I am trying to write an article on the above but it keeps getting rejected and I don&amp;#039;t know why. The Andrew Berry mentioned in the article The Weeds (Indie Band) links to another Andew Berry and not the one in the one mentioned. Thank you Lucy [[User:Lucyarnott|Lucyarnott]] ([[User talk:Lucyarnott|talk]]) 01:37, 16 September 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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:Firstly,you should use [[WP:INCITE|inline citations]] to clarify which of your sources supports which of the draft&amp;#039;s statements. Secondly, at a glance most of your sources mention Berry only in passing without providing any detailed coverage. That&amp;#039;s likely not enough to establish that Berry is [[WP:BIO|notable]] enough for an article. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 14:23, 16 September 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Naz Nizami]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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My submission was not  accepted. Why?[[User:Naz nizami|Naz nizami]] ([[User talk:Naz nizami|talk]]) 12:58, 16 September 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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:As Anne Delong said in her reply, that draft cites no [[WP:RS|reliable sources]] such as newspaper articles about Nizami. We need such sources both to establish that Nizami is [[WP:BIO|notable]] enough for an article and to allow our readers to [[WP:V|verify]] the content. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 14:23, 16 September 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Review of [[User:Lisaweinert/sandbox]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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[[User:Lisaweinert/sandbox]]&lt;br /&gt;
Why was my page declined? [[User:Lisaweinert|Lisaweinert]] ([[User talk:Lisaweinert|talk]]) 20:23, 16 September 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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:I assume you mean  [[User:Lisaweinert/sandbox]], so I have corrected the links above. Does the explanation in the pink box not help:?--[[User:Ukexpat|ukexpat]] ([[User talk:Ukexpat|talk]]) 20:38, 16 September 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Asaph Adona]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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MatthewVanitas &lt;br /&gt;
Thank you for your letter.I got your message.Can you tell me why my submission was declined,and can you tell me how I would go about to put my info on Wikepedia.&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you&lt;br /&gt;
Asaph Adonai&lt;br /&gt;
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Supermarket Pianist  &amp;lt;span style=&amp;quot;font-size: smaller;&amp;quot; class=&amp;quot;autosigned&amp;quot;&amp;gt;— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/216.14.231.42|216.14.231.42]] ([[User talk:216.14.231.42|talk]]) 21:43, 16 September 2013 (UTC)&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;&amp;lt;!-- Template:Unsigned IP --&amp;gt; &amp;lt;!--Autosigned by SineBot--&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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::Please read the advice in the pink box at the top of your article? You have not clearly demonstrated that he meets [[WP:Notability]] (that is, that news media, academia, etc. have found fit to write about him and his importance) and you have not provided any [[WP:Sourcing]]. Is there any media or academic coverage of Adonai and his career? &lt;br /&gt;
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::Also, it appears you&amp;#039;re writing about yourself, which is a very bad idea though not completely banned. Please see [[WP:Autobiography]] for why this is ill-advised. [[User:MatthewVanitas|MatthewVanitas]] ([[User talk:MatthewVanitas|talk]]) 22:24, 16 September 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/David Tineo Draft]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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This is my first article, so there&amp;#039;s no telling what I may have bungled.  &lt;br /&gt;
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A)&lt;br /&gt;
In the process of attempting to submit an article about David Tineo I believe I may have submitted the article twice.  Does this gum anything up?&lt;br /&gt;
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B)&lt;br /&gt;
When checking to see if the article had been reviewed I clicked my way to the following page: &lt;br /&gt;
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https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/David_Tineo_Draft&amp;amp;diff=prev&amp;amp;oldid=570884571&lt;br /&gt;
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It urges me to press a &amp;quot;Save&amp;quot; button ... but no such button appears on the page.  I&amp;#039;m confused.&lt;br /&gt;
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C)&lt;br /&gt;
A separate note says that a bot removed some cruft from my article categories.  (I never quite figured those out.)  But the article looks unchanged.  Am I misinterpreting the note?  Is the bot urging me to make those changes myself?  If so, is it possible I&amp;#039;ll make the changes to one version of this article (see &amp;quot;A&amp;quot;, above) but not the other?&lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for any advice you can render.&lt;br /&gt;
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El Mangosta  &amp;lt;small&amp;gt;&amp;lt;span class=&amp;quot;autosigned&amp;quot;&amp;gt;— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:ElMangosta|ElMangosta]] ([[User talk:ElMangosta|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/ElMangosta|contribs]]) 22:57, 16 September 2013 (UTC)&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/small&amp;gt;&amp;lt;!-- Template:Unsigned --&amp;gt; &amp;lt;!--Autosigned by SineBot--&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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:You haven&amp;#039;t submitted the draft twice, and if you had, the worst that would happen is that it would be dated by the latest submission. &lt;br /&gt;
:The &amp;quot;press save page&amp;quot; comment is a relic of when you submitted the draft; the submission will come with instructions, and the instructions will remain after you have actually submitted it. That comment could be removed.&lt;br /&gt;
:Drafts should not be included in article [[WP:CAT|categories]] (yet). Thus the bot [https://en.wikipedia.org/w/index.php?title=Wikipedia_talk%3AArticles_for_creation%2FDavid_Tineo_Draft&amp;amp;diff=572390091&amp;amp;oldid=570884571 changed the category code] and turned {{mono|&amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[Category:American artists]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;}} into {{mono|&amp;lt;nowiki&amp;gt;[[:Category:American artists]]&amp;lt;/nowiki&amp;gt;}} and so on - the former would add the page to the category (a kind of sorting tool used to group articles by essential, defining features), the latter just adds a link to the category page: [[:Category:American artists]]. That will automatically be reverted once the draft is accepted. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 02:33, 17 September 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Perfect Vodka®]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I would like to know why the Article  [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Perfect Vodka®]]  was rejected. It is a legitimate brand that was just purchased from Perfect 1864 vodka. My sources are reliable and the information is accredited [[User:Perfect Brands LLC|Perfect Brands LLC]] ([[User talk:Perfect Brands LLC|talk]]) 23:33, 16 September 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
: I think you may have meant [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Perfect Vodka]]? - [[User:David Biddulph|David Biddulph]] ([[User talk:David Biddulph|talk]]) 23:40, 16 September 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
:Read the decline message - it explains why it was rejected. ~[[User:Charmlet|&amp;lt;span style=&amp;quot;color:maroon;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;Charmlet&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]] &amp;lt;sup&amp;gt;[[User talk:Charmlet|&amp;lt;span style=&amp;quot;color:black;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;-talk-&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]]&amp;lt;/sup&amp;gt; 23:41, 16 September 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
::The draft has been deleted as spam/advertising. [[User:Dodger67|Roger (Dodger67)]] ([[User talk:Dodger67|talk]]) 09:19, 18 September 2013 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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