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== Reply to your [[WP:AFCHD|Articles for Creation Help Desk]] question on [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Barani Institute of Information Technology|Barani Institute of Information Technology]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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[[File:AFC-Logo.svg|50px]] Hello, WikiProject Articles for creation! I&amp;#039;m [[User:Ikramafzal|Ikramafzal]]. I have replied to your question on the [[WP:AFCHD|Articles for Creation Help Desk]] about [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Barani Institute of Information Technology|Barani Institute of Information Technology]].&amp;lt;br/&amp;gt; You can read it at [[Wikipedia:WikiProject Articles for creation/Help desk#{{ #if: new section | new section |Review of Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Barani Institute of Information Technology}}]].&amp;lt;!-- Template:AFCHD --&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
I have submitted my draft that was reviewed by few people.One reviewer said that it was copyrighted. But actually it was not.I want to know the weaknesses in my page. Please help me in this.[[User:Ikramafzal|Ikramafzal]] ([[User talk:Ikramafzal|talk]]) 11:15, 8 October 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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:The bulk of this submission was copied directly from the Institute&amp;#039;s own website, which is not permitted. I have therefore declined the submission. [[User:Arthur goes shopping|Arthur goes shopping]] ([[User talk:Arthur goes shopping|talk]]) 12:02, 8 October 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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: Your previous submission, at [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Barani institute of information technology]] was deleted for the same reason, as you were notified on your user talk page (with links for further detail). - [[User:David Biddulph|David Biddulph]] ([[User talk:David Biddulph|talk]]) 12:23, 8 October 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Fight For Peace]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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The following question is in regard to this entry:&lt;br /&gt;
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https://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Fight_for_Peace&lt;br /&gt;
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I would like to address the comment left by the reviewer:&lt;br /&gt;
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&amp;lt;blockquote&amp;gt;Comment: There is ample proof that FFP is widely known and important, but much of this article is either about Luke Dowdney and his ventures or lengthy reports from FFP funded research. Please write the article based primarily on what the news sources say about FFP. Where the news articles are hosted on the FFP website, please give the date, author, title of the news article so other readers can identify the sources. Sionk (talk) 21:18, 17 September 2013 (UTC)&amp;lt;/blockquote&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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1) I since left a response regarding the comment about &amp;quot;much of this article&amp;quot; being about Luke Dowdney, to which the second reviewer agreed with the contention of the original reviewer. The article has now been updated to include only three sentences about Luke Dowdney, and I believe mention of the founder of why and how he was influenced to create the organization belongs on the same page as the organization itself. I believe now the majority of the article is about the organization itself and only mentions Dowdney to give the reader a better context of the organization&amp;#039;s inception. If a completely new page about Dowdney needs to be created, please let me know.&lt;br /&gt;
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2) All articles hosted on the FFP website have been cited with dates, author and title, and/or have been linked directly to the site of the third party.&lt;br /&gt;
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3) The ECROYS report and any relevant findings have been removed from the page due to the organization being sponsored by the Laureus, the primary funder of the report. The only report that has been used is from the University of East London, which is an independent third party source with no financial ties to the organization.&lt;br /&gt;
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4) I have removed mention of two of the awards that were awarded to Luke Dowdney and now the only award mentioned is to Fight for Peace and is clearly labeled as such in the article. &lt;br /&gt;
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I believe I have addressed all issues raised in the comments from reviewers, but if there are any other issues found in other sections, please let me know and I will do my best to resolve the issue. Thank you.  &amp;lt;small&amp;gt;&amp;lt;span class=&amp;quot;autosigned&amp;quot;&amp;gt;— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Nickwong84|Nickwong84]] ([[User talk:Nickwong84|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Nickwong84|contribs]]) 15:32, 8 October 2013 (UTC)&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/small&amp;gt;&amp;lt;!-- Template:Unsigned --&amp;gt; &amp;lt;!--Autosigned by SineBot--&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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:Two quick comments. Firstly, I don&amp;#039;t think all articles hosted on the FPP website have been cited with author, date and so on. In fact, the references to neither The Evening Standard nor Boxing News come with that kind of information. That&amp;#039;s comparatively easy to fix (see [[Template:Cite news]] for the standard way to format such references). Much worse is the second issue: The sources don&amp;#039;t actually say what they&amp;#039;re cited for. For example, the Evening Standard is the lone source for the Global Alumni Programme section - and doesn&amp;#039;t even mention that programme. It also doesn&amp;#039;t mention FFP Academies, for example, or the UN Habitat. Similarly, the LUTA Clothing section cites a single source, a speakers&amp;#039; list (about whose [[WP:RS|reliability]] by Wikipedia&amp;#039;s standards I have doubts anyway) that doesn&amp;#039;t confirm multiple of that section&amp;#039;s claims. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 16:04, 8 October 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Sreeja]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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	Buffbills7701 left a message on my talk page&lt;br /&gt;
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Saying that article got declined.  Why and How I can resolve this.  &amp;lt;small&amp;gt;&amp;lt;span class=&amp;quot;autosigned&amp;quot;&amp;gt;— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:Ganeshmanohar|Ganeshmanohar]] ([[User talk:Ganeshmanohar|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/Ganeshmanohar|contribs]]) 21:49, 8 October 2013 (UTC)&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/small&amp;gt;&amp;lt;!-- Template:Unsigned --&amp;gt; &amp;lt;!--Autosigned by SineBot--&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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* The article tells us next to nothing about what Sreeja is - for instance, the one sentence of prose in the article lacks a [[finite verb]], so isn&amp;#039;t even proper English. Sorry. We can see that she&amp;#039;s an actress and has appeared on television, but at least one source of the two you have used is a [[WP:SPS|self published blog]], which unsuitable to use as a reference. If she&amp;#039;s well known in India, there will be national newspaper and magazine coverage she has appeared in. [[User:Ritchie333|&amp;lt;span style=&amp;quot;color:#7F007F;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;Ritchie333&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]] [[User talk:Ritchie333|&amp;lt;sup style=&amp;quot;color:#7F007F;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;(talk)&amp;lt;/sup&amp;gt;]] [[Special:Contributions/Ritchie333|&amp;lt;sup style=&amp;quot;color:#7F007F;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;(cont)&amp;lt;/sup&amp;gt;]]  10:26, 9 October 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/North American Indigenous Image Awards (NAIIA)]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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[[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/North American Indigenous Image Awards (NAIIA)]]&lt;br /&gt;
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Can you please tell me what I need to do to my article to pass the review? &lt;br /&gt;
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Thanks much, &lt;br /&gt;
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Maryl Hamilton&lt;br /&gt;
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[[User:Azmaryl|Azmaryl]] ([[User talk:Azmaryl|talk]]) 22:10, 8 October 2013 (UTC)azmaryl[[User:Azmaryl|Azmaryl]] ([[User talk:Azmaryl|talk]]) 22:10, 8 October 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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: [[User:MatthewVanitas|MatthewVanitas]] has given you a detailed description of what you will need to do for the article to pass in the &amp;quot;declined&amp;quot; submission box. As stated, you need more than two news pieces to prove that the article is a suitable subject for Wikipedia. [[User:Ritchie333|&amp;lt;span style=&amp;quot;color:#7F007F;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;Ritchie333&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]] [[User talk:Ritchie333|&amp;lt;sup style=&amp;quot;color:#7F007F;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;(talk)&amp;lt;/sup&amp;gt;]] [[Special:Contributions/Ritchie333|&amp;lt;sup style=&amp;quot;color:#7F007F;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;(cont)&amp;lt;/sup&amp;gt;]]  10:19, 9 October 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Barry M. Greenberg]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi There! Just wondering why the article was not accepted. Are there any suggestions I can take to make the article stronger so it can be accepted? Thank you!!  &amp;lt;small&amp;gt;&amp;lt;span class=&amp;quot;autosigned&amp;quot;&amp;gt;— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[User:HeatherM PDX|HeatherM PDX]] ([[User talk:HeatherM PDX|talk]] • [[Special:Contributions/HeatherM PDX|contribs]]) 23:50, 8 October 2013 (UTC)&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;&amp;lt;/small&amp;gt;&amp;lt;!-- Template:Unsigned --&amp;gt; &amp;lt;!--Autosigned by SineBot--&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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* Your article was deleted because it was a [[WP:COPYVIO|copyright infringement]]. Wikipedia&amp;#039;s copyright policies are a little unusual, but basically all content on here is free to copy and sell to others. Since this isn&amp;#039;t what most people expect, we cannot take prose or content from other sites without a specific licence, and any that &amp;#039;&amp;#039;do&amp;#039;&amp;#039; get copied have to be instantly deleted to comply with our legal policy. Sorry. The easiest thing to do is rewrite the article again in your own words. [[User:Ritchie333|&amp;lt;span style=&amp;quot;color:#7F007F;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;Ritchie333&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]] [[User talk:Ritchie333|&amp;lt;sup style=&amp;quot;color:#7F007F;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;(talk)&amp;lt;/sup&amp;gt;]] [[Special:Contributions/Ritchie333|&amp;lt;sup style=&amp;quot;color:#7F007F;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;(cont)&amp;lt;/sup&amp;gt;]]  10:14, 9 October 2013 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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