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== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Muneeb Faiq]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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I have submitted an article for review. The title is Muneeb Faiq. It is a biographical sketch of a renowned personality. I am not able to trace the proceedings. Please help...  &amp;lt;span style=&amp;quot;font-size: smaller;&amp;quot; class=&amp;quot;autosigned&amp;quot;&amp;gt;— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/14.139.45.243|14.139.45.243]] ([[User talk:14.139.45.243|talk]]) 07:28, 22 July 2013 (UTC)&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;&amp;lt;!-- Template:Unsigned IP --&amp;gt; &amp;lt;!--Autosigned by SineBot--&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
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:The draft was declined on July 12. The given sources were either [[WP:PRIMARY|primary sources]] such as Faiq&amp;#039;s own writings, or [[WP:RS|unreliable]] sources such as a wiki talk page. Such sources cannot establish that Faiq is [[WP:PROF|notable]] enough for an encyclopedia article; we&amp;#039;ll need reliable third-party sources such as newspaper articles about him or peer-reviewed scholarly papers (written by others, not by Faiq!) that discuss his work in some detail. You were notified of this result at [[User talk:14.139.45.242]], the talk page of the IP address you had used to submit the draft. [[User:Huon|Huon]] ([[User talk:Huon|talk]]) 10:56, 22 July 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Review of [[Wikipedia talk:Articles for creation/Openmatics]] ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Good morning,&lt;br /&gt;
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could you please give me a more detailed explanation for the article rejection. &lt;br /&gt;
I would of course like to improve it so it could be published, but the comments &lt;br /&gt;
I received are twice the same and don&amp;#039;t really help me much with the improvement &lt;br /&gt;
process. &lt;br /&gt;
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I appreciate any help or specific feedback you may offer. &lt;br /&gt;
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Thank you for your time and help,&lt;br /&gt;
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http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Wikipedia_talk:Articles_for_creation/Openmatics&lt;br /&gt;
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P.S. - Also the article was in the final document twice...which also spoiled the content menu. Why does that happen? &lt;br /&gt;
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[[User:Openmatics|OM]] ([[User talk:Openmatics|talk]]) 08:20, 22 July 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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:Firstly, your username may not be acceptable - a Wikipedia user account is for &amp;#039;&amp;#039;one&amp;#039;&amp;#039; person and implying you edit on behalf of a company will cause problems up to, and including, you being [[WP:BLOCK|blocked from editing]]. Click [[WP:RENAME|here]] to see how to change your username to something more appropriate.&lt;br /&gt;
:Secondly, the principal problem I see with the article is that, while there is coverage from news in the telematics industry, and it looks like Openmatics might be [[WP:N|notable]], the article doesn&amp;#039;t really mention much of the content that is in those sources and comes across more like a bland product description. Have a look at the information in the sources, and try and write the article around that. For example, there&amp;#039;s a good quote from [http://www.motor.com/newsletters/20101004/WebFiles/ID2_Openmatics.html Motor Magazine] which states, regarding Openmatics, &amp;quot;At times, I wonder whether we have made things more difficult and complex than they need to be, and are reluctant to change our ways.&amp;quot; That&amp;#039;s a pretty different point of view to what the article currently says. [[User:Ritchie333|&amp;lt;span style=&amp;quot;color:#7F007F;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;Ritchie333&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;#039;&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;]] [[User talk:Ritchie333|&amp;lt;sup style=&amp;quot;color:#7F007F;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;(talk)&amp;lt;/sup&amp;gt;]] [[Special:Contributions/Ritchie333|&amp;lt;sup style=&amp;quot;color:#7F007F;&amp;quot;&amp;gt;(cont)&amp;lt;/sup&amp;gt;]]  08:40, 22 July 2013 (UTC)&lt;br /&gt;
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== Otto Grunbaum ==&lt;br /&gt;
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Hi , &lt;br /&gt;
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is it possible to create a page on Otto Grunbaum and or the history of the standard-grunbaum furniture company.Normally when researching on wikipedia this sort of information is normally available however not in this case.&lt;br /&gt;
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Have tried several other lines of enquiries to see how the company was built, the history of its originators such as :-companies that have ceased trading ,mergers etc but am not having much luck either on wikipedia or on the net.&lt;br /&gt;
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kind regards,&lt;br /&gt;
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Charlie  &amp;lt;span style=&amp;quot;font-size: smaller;&amp;quot; class=&amp;quot;autosigned&amp;quot;&amp;gt;— Preceding [[Wikipedia:Signatures|unsigned]] comment added by [[Special:Contributions/86.145.132.171|86.145.132.171]] ([[User talk:86.145.132.171|talk]]) 14:41, 22 July 2013 (UTC)&amp;lt;/span&amp;gt;&amp;lt;!-- Template:Unsigned IP --&amp;gt; &amp;lt;!--Autosigned by SineBot--&amp;gt;&lt;br /&gt;
:This board is for questions about Articles for Creation submissions.  If you feel that this man or his company meet Wikipedia&amp;#039;s standards, feel free to start an AfC for him or it.  If you&amp;#039;re trying to find information on this subject, try the [[WP:Reference desk|reference desk]] instead.  [[User:Howicus|Howicus]] ([[User talk:Howicus|talk]]) 15:01, 22 July 2013 (UTC)&lt;/div&gt;</summary>
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