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===[[Toma T. Socolescu]]===

I have written the English version of this article.

I am the author of the French version.

However, my level of English is not as good as it should for this kind of publication.
I there need help to improve the level of English of the text.

Thank you! --[[User:Cbrajon|Cbrajon]] ([[User talk:Cbrajon|talk]]) 10:47, 14 December 2009 (UTC)

: I've read through the article, it's obviously well researched. I'm happy to do a copy edit in order to improve the English. However, I do have some comments that may help you improve it prior to me doing that:

# The [[WP:LEAD|LEAD]] section at the beginning of the article should be able to act as a summary of the important aspects and should be able to stand alone as a concise overview. In this case you could write a few short paragraphs.
# There are couple of unreferenced paragraphs at the beginning of the article. Certainly I think that the sentence in the Biography stating ''he is still considered'' should have a reference.
# consider changing the sections with bullet points into plain paragraphs as the text will be easier to read. Refer to the Manual of Style for help [[WP:MOS|MOS]]
# improve the [[WP:LINK|wikilinks]]: there is no need to link a word several times in a section, for example, Ploieşti.
# Non-English sources: in the legacy section the quotation extract written in French is maybe not helpful to English language readers, it could be that you provide a translation in the footnotes if you think that it is important. There is some guidance at [[WP:NONENG|Non English Sources]]
# external links: try and reduce the number of external links, especially those that point to sites that English readers can't understand.

: [[User:Kenchikuben|Kenchikuben]] ([[User talk:Kenchikuben|talk]]) 16:01, 7 April 2010 (UTC)

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