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'''This peer review discussion has been closed.'''<br/> <noinclude>[[Category:May 2008 peer reviews]]</noinclude>
I've listed this article for peer review because I am trying to have it achieve the status of "good article".

Thanks, [[User:Blewis87|Blewis87]] ([[User talk:Blewis87|talk]]) 19:56, 17 April 2008 (UTC)

;Comments from {{User|The Rambling Man}}
*Expand the lead a little - see [[WP:LEAD]] for guidance.
*What's a MOSFET? Explain it a little before just using the acronym. The article needs to appeal to non-experts.
*Avoid spaces before citations per [[WP:CITE]].
*Headings need to comply with [[WP:HEAD]] so See Also should be See also.
*Image caption "A Standard MOSFET" - standard doesn't need capitalising. Also, what relevance does this image have to the article? It's not clear to me.
*"seventies" 1970s.
*"The gate regions would sometimes fail to overlap the source and drain. This results in a non-working MOSFET" merge these sentences.
*"Innovations that made Self-Aligned Gate Technology possible" doesn't need to be bold and is overcapitalised.
*"Without these innovations, self-aligned gates would not have been possible." that's already pretty clear from the introduction to this part of the article.
*History section needs further citation and some work on the prose. Right now it's just a load of patent numbers, dates, authors, and article titles.
*"The importance of self-aligned gates comes in the process used to make them." what does this mean?
*Avoid lists of process steps - try writing out as prose.
*Number ranges use en-dash, not hyphen, to separate, per [[WP:DASH]].
*See also section should be bullet pointed.
*Clean room image is used and mentioned in the caption but not in the article.
That's a start for you. [[User:The Rambling Man|The Rambling Man]] ([[User talk:The Rambling Man|talk]]) 16:13, 20 April 2008 (UTC)

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